湖南长沙明德天心中学人教英语七年级下学期期中书面表达
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英语期中书面表达 一、书面表达评分标准（15 分） A档（13-15分） 能够围绕话题进行表述，语言基本无误，行为连贯，表达清楚。
B档（11-12分） 能够围绕话题进行表述，语言有少量错误，表达基本连贯、清楚。
C档（9-10分） 能够基本围绕话题进行表述，语言表达有些错误，行文很不连贯，但不影响句意的理解。
D档（6-8分） 尚能围绕话题进行表述，语言错误较多，影响句意表达。
E档（0-5分）只能写出与话题相关的一些单词或一两个句子，只有个别句子可懂。
二、书面表达范文：
01、 假设你是Mary，Tom是你新认识的美国网友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根据以下提示，给他回一封电邮。
Name Mary Smith Sex (性别) girl Nationality (国籍) English Class Class 1, Grade 1 Age 13 Phone number 0574-87341434 Favorite color red English teacher Ms Li Like singing, reading, watching TV Don’t like eating fruit, running 内容：1、你的爱好和特长；
2、你的日常生活习惯（至少两点）；
3、你的主要上学方式以及其花费你大约多长时间；
4、现在是晚上8点，你家人正在做什么。
要求：1、文章须包含所有写作内容，并可适当发挥；
2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3、词数：60-80。
Dear Tom, Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about myself. My name is Mary Smith. I’m a 13-year-old English girl. I’m studying in Class 1, Grade 1. My English teacher is Ms. Li and she is very kind to us. I like red best and I have many hobbies like singing, reading and watching TV. I can sing very well. But I don’t like running or eating fruit. Every morning, it takes me 20 minutes to walk to my school, so I have to get up at 7 o’clock. After class, I always practice singing in my school’s singing club. Now it’s 8 p.m. and my parents are watching TV. My sister is exercising. It’s good for her health. Looking forward to your reply or you can call me at 0574-87341434. Yours, Mary 02. 请你根据表格中的信息写一篇短文介绍一下你的朋友Mary 。
姓名：Mary 年龄：
13 岁 爱好：阅读、画画 能力：会说英语，会唱歌、弹钢琴，但是她不会打篮球. 她通常早上6:30起床，然后坐公交车去上学 她最喜欢的动物是考拉，因为它们真的很可爱。
现在是晚上八点半，她的爸爸正在读报纸，妈妈正在打扫房间，爷爷正在看电视，奶奶正在打电话。Mary正在做她的家庭作业，她的妹妹正在学英语。
I have a good friend. Her name is Mary. She is thirteen years old. She likes reading and she is good at drawing pictures. She can also speak English. She can sing and play the piano well, but she can’t play basketball. She usually gets up at 6:30 in the morning. Then she goes to school by bus. It takes her about 10 minutes. Her favorite animals are koalas, because they are really cute. Now it’s eight thirty in the evening. Her father is reading a newspaper. Her mother is cleaning the room. Her grandfather is watching TV. Her grandmother is talking on the phone. Mary is doing her homework. Her sister is studying English. They are having a good time. 03. 这学期，你们班来了一位名叫Paul 的新同学，并且和你成了好朋友，请你根据以下提示介绍一下他。
基本信息 13岁，会说英语和中文。
兴趣爱好 擅长画画，想加入艺术俱乐部。喜欢的动物是树袋熊。
上学方式 家离学校很近，大约1千米。每天花10分钟步行到校。
正在做的事 现在正是周日下午2点钟，他正和朋友们在公园里玩。
公园里其他人正在做的事情：… I have a new friend this term. His name is Paul. He is 13 years old. He can speak English and Chinese. Paul is good at drawing and he wants to join an art club. He likes koalas very much. His home is close to the school. It’s about one kilometer away. It takes him 10 minutes to walk to school every day. Now, it’s 2 o’clock on Sunday afternoon. Paul is playing with his friends in the park. There are many people in the park. Some people are chatting under the tree. Others are exercising. Do you want to make a friend with him? 04．你的父母很严厉吗？他们会给你制定很多规则吗？假如你有权利给你父母定规则，你会给他们制定哪些规则呢？请结合下列提示，以“Rules for my parents”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
规则 原因 *不要一直玩手机、看电视 *多和我交谈 *早睡早起 补充一点… *拥有好习惯 *建立幸福的家庭 … 要求：(3) 需要补充至少一条规则和原因。
Rules for my parents My parents are very strict with me and they make so many rules for me. I think they need some rules, too. First, don’t keep playing on the phone or watching TV at home. Second, talk to me often about my happiness and sadness. And then, go to bed early and get up early. It’s good for health. Lastly, don’t drink too much wine and eat more fruit and vegetables. I think these rules are important. They can help my parents have good habits. We can get on well and help us have a happy family. So they must follow these rules. 05. 假如Ben是你的叔叔，他在杭州动物园工作，请你根据下表中的内容写一篇短文，向你的朋友Jack介绍Ben和他的工作。字数70词左右，并适当拓展。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
姓名 Ben 年龄 25 特长 Look after animals, play the guitar 喜欢的动物和原因 Pandas, because. 去动物园的交通方式 By bike 正在做什么 Cook food for animals 动物园的规则 1. Be friendly to animals.;2…… 提示词 ∶触摸（ touch）， 喂养（feed ） Dear Jack, Dear Jack, How＇s everything going? I＇m writing to you to tell you something about my uncle Ben. He is25 years old and he is a worker in Hangzhou Zoo. So he is very good at looking after animals. Besides, he also plays the guitar well. His favorite animal is pandas, because they are really cute. My uncle goes to work by bike every day. Now, guess, what is my uncle doing now? Haha, he is cooking food for animals. If you want to come to Hangzhou Zoo, you should be friendly to animals. What＇s more, don＇t touch or feed animals, which is very dangerous. Yours, Li Ming 06. 假如你是李华，在中学你己经有将近一年的学习时间。你即将读初中的表妹Linda想了解一下你在校的学习生活，请从学校课外活动，学校校规，上学方式以及你对学校的情感这几方面给她写一封信。
Dear Linda, I’m glad to receive your last letter. I’m also excited to tell you about my life in the middle school. I really love my school. It is not far from my school, so I always ride a bike to school. It takes me about 15 minutes. I think it’s good exercise. My school life is colorful. There are a lot of interesting clubs in our school. I join the basketball club, because I’m good at playing basketball. I can play basketball after class with our friends. The Art Festival is also a great time to have fun. There are many rules at school. We can’t arrive late for class. If we are late for class, the teacher will be angry. We must wear the school uniform every day. We have to say hello to our teachers when we meet them. We must follow the rules because the school makes rules to help us. I think I’m lucky because I have a great school. Yours, Li Hua 07. Mike 在学习生活遇到了很多问题，他不知道该怎么办，请你说出他的问题并帮助他出出主意， 要点如下：
1. 他喜欢打篮球，相机如体育俱乐部，但他妈妈认为这样对学习不好；
2. 作业太多，每天很晚才能睡觉，但是必须很早起床，睡眠不够，这样对健康不好；
3. 学校有太多的规定，总是得不到快乐；
4. 请你给他提出一到两点建议；
要求：
1. 不要逐字逐句翻译；
2. 60-80 词左右 3. 文章开头已经给出。
参考词汇：be bad for sth. 对...不好 enough 足够的 have fun 得到快乐 Mike has many problems now. ____________________________________________
