2021届高考英语一轮复习题型集训之话题写作集训20 科普与科技（解析版）x

2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作20

科普与科技

1.假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Patrick想了解你居家网课学习所使用的App或教学平台(微信：WeChat；钉钉：DingTalk；腾讯会议：Tencent Meeting；智学网：)。

请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1.App或平台的名称；

2.App或平台的功能；

3.App或平台的使用感受。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Patrick,

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Patrick,

I’d like to introduce to you the App for our online classes. DingTalk is our choice during the temporary school closure, which allows us to have our distance learning at home.

DingTalk has a wide range of functions. Teachers can switch between teaching and question asking, keeping us focused all the time. We students can track our day-to-day study arrangement, homework submission, exams, attendance report and overall performance.

DingTalk makes our online learning flexible and friendly, improves learning outcomes and helps us students fully engage in classes.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，根据要求给你的英国笔友Patrick写一封邮件，介绍你居家网课学习所使用的App或教学平台。

【详解】

第一步：应用文表达，注意格式规范，根据提示，整篇文章应使用一般现在时。

第二步：根据提纲依次写出App或平台的名称；App或平台的功能；App或平台的使用感受，内容包含全面，选择适当合理的词组，如introduce to，online classes，allow sb. to do…，between…and…等等。

第三步：连词成文，结构衔接得体。

【点睛】

第一段，开门见山，表达目的，清晰明确，简单明了。

第二段，说明文章主题内容，短语和词运用得体恰当。

第三段，最后谈论App或平台的使用感受，结构严谨。

文章内容完整，提纲要点全面，格式规范，语篇连贯，使用复合句，显示考生有很高的英语驾驭能力。

高分句型

DingTalk is our choice during the temporary school closure, which allows us to have our distance learning at home. （DingTalk 是我们在临时学校关闭期间的选择，它允许我们在家进行远程学习。）非限制性定语从句的运用。

2.去年以来，诸如抖音( Tik Tok/Douyin)等拍摄和发布短视频的手机应用程序在年轻人中颇受欢迎。假如你是李华，英国笔友May来信向你了解中国学生玩抖音的情况，并请你谈谈它的利与弊。

注意: 1.词数100左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

Dear Mary,

So glad to hear from you!

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【答案】

Dear Mary,

So glad to hear from you! I’m delighted that you are concerned about the most popular / downloaded app Tik Tok (Douyin) among Chinese students nowadays.

Tik Tok is an app of short video platform where people can show and share their life in a relaxing and lively way.The contents range from a lovely sleeping baby to a pet dog with funny behavior. On the one hand, it can enrich people’s life and relieve people of pressure to some degree. On the other hand, it may make people addicted to it so deeply that it can waste too much time and make their life circle smaller, affecting their real life and devotion to work.

Therefore, only when we use Tik Tok in an appropriate way can it benefit us most. Would you please introduce some interesting apps to me?

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封书信。

【详解】

根据提示可知，本篇为书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①拍摄和发布短视频的手机应用程序在年轻人中颇受欢迎；②中国学生玩抖音的情况；③玩抖音的利；④玩抖音的弊端。

第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：Tik Tok（抖音），short video platform（短视频平台），enrich people’s life and relieve people of pressure（丰富人们生活和缓解人们压力），be addicted to（沉溺）等。

第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。

【点睛】

本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合演讲稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。

限制性定语从句的使用Tik Tok is an app of short video platform where people can show and share their life in a relaxing and lively way.

非谓语动词的使用On the other hand, it may make people addicted to it so deeply that it can waste too much time and make their life circle smaller, affecting their real life and devotion to work.

3.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：

1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意；

2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。

注意：1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：探月 moon exploration

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Jim,

I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.

It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.

Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.

I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信给美国朋友Jim，和Jim探讨有关探月的话题。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

人称：第一人称为主

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意；

2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

moon exploration；be compared to；remind sb. of sb./sth.；as if；serve as；gaze at

第三步：连词成句

1. I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.

2. the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady.

3. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away.

4. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.

5. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon?

(根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。）

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表换一种方式表达：In other words, that is to say,

6.表进行举例说明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陈述事实：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表选择：either…or…，or

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，结构严谨，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid这句话中用了what引导的宾语从句，如which is the driving force that has brought our species this far中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；使用了非常好的短语，如be compared to，remind sb. of sb./sth.，serve as，gaze at等，为文章增色不少；并注意了句子的衔接，如Also，What’s more，By the way。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

4.假如你是李华，你的美国网友Tom对遍布中国大街小巷的扫码支付很感兴趣，特意给你写信想了解一下。你根据以下提示给他回信：

1.中国扫码支付的现状；

2.扫码支付方法：在智能手机上打开支付宝或微信app，扫描二维码；

3.扫码支付的好处。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：扫码支付Scan to Pay；支付宝Alipay；微信WeChat；二维码QR code

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【答案】

Dear Tom,

I am more than pleased to have received your letter, in which you expressed great interest in the widely-used Scan to Pay, the way people pay for their purchases in China.

As everyone can see, the Scan to Pay is gaining more and more popularity among people. Because of its convenience, people, whether young or old, are paying by using their mobile phones. What they have to do is enter the app of Alipay or WeChat, and scan the QR codes. The Scan to Pay is advantageous in that it saves us the trouble of carrying cash on ourselves. Moreover, it enables us to pay whenever and wherever we like.

I am sure you will like it when you have tried it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作。你的美国网友对中国的扫码支付很感兴趣，想要了解，请你根据提示给他回信。书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面，不能有遗漏和省略。根据所给提示，注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词各项要点，就不难写出一篇好的文章。写作时注意选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采，同时注意时态的选择，尽量选择简洁的语言，灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

【亮点说明】范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。同时作者使用了一些常高级句型：第一段是一个长句子，使用了短语more than pleased，in which引导的非限制性定语从句以及省略了that的定语从句；As everyone can see,...使用了as引导的定语从句；What they have to do is enter the app of Alipay or WeChat, and scan the QR codes.使用了what引导的主语从句以及不带to的不定式作表语；The Scan to Pay is advantageous in that it saves us the trouble of carrying cash on ourselves. 使用了in that引导的状语从句；Moreover, it enables us to pay whenever and wherever we like.使用了whenever和wherever引导的让步状语从句。最后一句使用了it作形式宾语以及when引导的宾语从句。

5.假如你是晨光中学的李津，为配合学校的科技月活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿，文章内容包括：

1. 简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人。

2. 谈谈这款生活智能机器人的功能（至少写2点）

3. 说明生活型机器人的意义。

注意：1. 词数不要少于100。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：智能机器人intelligent robot

June 10, 2020

Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.

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【答案】

June 10, 2020

Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you.

In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.

So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.

There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人的相关信息。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：说明文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式结构。第一段提出话题“一款生活型智能机器人”；第二段讲述其功能特点；第三段说明其意义。

要求：1.提出话题（an intelligent robot）

2.介绍相关情况：功能强大（so many powerful functions）

1）做家务（do all the housework）

2）照顾幼小（take good care of the elderly and the sick）

3) 网络娱乐（surf the Internet;entertain）

3. 意义阐述

1）体现科技发展（show the rapid development of science and technology of our country）

2）生活助手（will be a big helper）

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to

第三步：连词成句

1. In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.

2. So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.

3. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour.

4. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them.

5. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.

6. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example.

7. There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.

8. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last

2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including

3.表因果关系：because; as; so; thus; therefore; as a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：

In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.( 近年来，一个智能机器人，由太阳能驱动，这是环保的，已经被设计在我们的生活中提供日常援助的科学家在我们的国家。)这句话运用了which引导定语从句。

So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.( 这个智能机器人有这么多强大的功能，它可以在各个方面帮助我们。)该句中使用了so that结果状语从句，且将“So+adj.”结构置于句首，使该句使用了部分倒装句式。

Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.( 当然，您还可以利用这个机器人，不仅可以与它通信，还可以通过它浏览网络以收集大量信息。)该句使用了not only…but(also)并列句结构。

There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.( 毫无疑问，这种智能机器人的创造表明了我国科学技术的迅速发展。)该句使用了固定句式“there’s no doubt that…”，其中that引导同位语从句。

2.使用了一些固定词组，如environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to等。

全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

6.假如你是李华，你远在英国的朋友Smith从网上得知移动支付改变了中国人的生活方式。他想了解一些更详细的移动支付情况，请你根据下面要点提示，给Smith发一封电子邮件。

要点: 1.生活中的具体体现; 2.好处。

要求:词数100左右。

参考词汇:移动支付mobile payment

Dear Smith,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Smith,

I'm Li Hua, a student in China. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China, I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.

As you know, Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China. On the one hand, its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble. On the other hand, Mobile Payment is widely used in our dailylife, like paying bills, booking tickets and so on. In a word, Mobile Payment is used in nearly everything and has really changed our life.

I will be very happy if my introduction can make you have a clear idea of Mobile Payment.

Kind regards.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇是应用文，通过回复邮件方式向好友描述移动支付在生活中的具体体现和好处。

【详解】

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时

结构：总分总

总分总指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，最后一段再进行总结升华，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表明自己乐意提供帮助

2.具体阐述移动支付在生活中的好处

1) 产生好处的具体例子1 (example 1)

2）产生好处的具体例子2 (example 2)

3) 总结升华在其他方面的影响。

　(conclusion)

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be eager to; a brief introduction; tendency; On the one hand… On the other hand;

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing that you are eager to learn something more about Mobile Payment in China,

2. I deeply welcome the opportunity to give you a brief introduction about it.

3. Mobile Payment has been a tendency in China.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：On the one hand… On the other hand; In a word,

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如“its convenience as well as efficiency makes it possible for us to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash, which saves us much time and trouble.” 这句话运用了非限制性定语从句，同时it在这里做形式宾语，真正的宾语是to take with us only a mobile phone rather than much cash。

　固定搭配运用了如 be eager to; a brief introduction等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

7.一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。

1.家庭：

2.工作：

3.业余生活。

注意：1.词数100左右：

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

3.开头语已为你写好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future._______________________________

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【答案】

I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I’will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于半开放性作文。要求考生以“十年后的我”为题，写一篇征文。

【详解】

本文的话题是“十年后的我”，要求考生从家庭、工作和业余生活来想象十年以后的自己。文章应该使用一般将来时和第一人称。因为提示信息较少，所以要充分发挥想象，增加适当的细节以使行文连贯，充实内容。比如可以联想到的内容有健身，度假，聚会等等。在写作时尽量使用恰当的连接词，插入语以使文章层次分明，使用多种句式结构和高级词汇亮点来提高文章的档次，如定语从句，宾语从句和状语从句等。此外，因为是畅想未来，所以要用一般将来时。

【亮点说明】

本篇范文短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In my free time , In a word , such as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了较多的高级语法表达，如I hope I'll work in a computer company as a program designer.（省略that的宾语从句）I'll do a good job in whatever I do.（whatever引导的宾语从句）In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.（比较级+and+比较级连用）等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。